Spider-Man: Maximum Venom part 4, 2020
All rise! In this episode you get what everyone wants from a TV cartoon: courtroom drama!
Seriously, a big chunk of this one happens in a courtroom. That’s a single environment with a limited number of characters, most of them seated, talking to each other. Exactly what you look for in a cartoon, right? So you may be wondering, how does one make a courtroom drama watchable in a cartoon?
The first thing you need, of course, is characters you care about. That’s a foundation you have to build over the course of a series. If nobody cares about the characters, nobody will care what happens to them. But that’s outside the scope of this essay, so we’ll move on.
The second thing you need is a good script with well-paced dialogue that doesn’t get bogged down in procedure. We only have 22 minutes, after all, and there are other things to do in this episode. This is the responsibility of the writer. The filmmaking begins once we have the finished script.
I say “filmmaking” because that’s exactly what we do in a storyboard. We use the same toolbox everyone in live-action uses. We decide what the camera needs to see, how the characters perform, whether a shot should be wide, medium, or close, where the lights are, when to amp up the drama, and on and on. Really, it’s no different from a busy action scene. You just have a more limited space to play in and you need to make the most of it.
If an artist can’t get interested in their subject, you end up with a very bland storyboard. If they think, “this scene boring, so I can’t make it interesting,” maybe they’re not cut out for the job. Everything will be boring if you approach it that way. And the opposite is also true: everything can be made interesting if you’re imaginative enough to find some interest in it.
Courtroom drama can be highly engaging in a live-action setting, even if most of the actors aren’t moving. The director and camera operator make up for that by anticipating what the viewers want to see, and then by turns granting that wish or subverting it for effect. It’s another version of what I wrote about over here: setting a baseline and then finding ways to spike it.
The major difference between live-action and animation, though, is that when you build a live-action set you can shoot anywhere you want in it. In animation, you have to pay a separate fee for every background because they all have to be individually drawn and painted. This is what drives us to reuse backgrounds whenever we can. If it’s already been paid for, it costs nothing to use it again. As you watch the courtroom scenes in this episode, you’ll see the same angles and backgrounds many times.
With that as a given limitation, it’s all on you as the storyboard artist to make sure it doesn’t feel repetitive. So that’s where you drill down on what a courtroom drama is all about; people conveying information and other people reacting to it. That allows you to cut back and forth a lot, but this too can get repetitive if you don’t find ways to spike it.
My approach to this springs from my cardinal rule about all animation filmmaking: let the dialogue do the talking. By that I mean, examine what’s being said and focus on who’s saying it, but also be conscious of who’s listening and who is affected. The content of a line will tell you if it’s broad or intimate. Broad lines call for big scenes with several people listening. Intimate lines tell you to move the camera in for close-ups. If someone in particular has a specific reaction to what’s being said, that’s your cue to put them on screen while they’re listening.
I could cite more examples, but the key word is MOTIVATION. Your camera represents your audience. They’re an invisible character observing the scene you’re creating. Whatever they’re motivated to look it is what your camera should look at. That’s the baseline. When you want to surprise them with something unexpected, that’s the spike.
Dialogue is another form of motivation. If you let the dialogue motivate your choice of angles and subjects, you’ll almost always get it right. And your scene will be anything but boring. Court dismissed.
For my episode (part 1 of 2), our storyboard team was joined by new arrivals named Jarelle Dampier and Eric Meister, who would remain on through the second half of our short season. I’m pretty sure Ibraheem Jara and Shaan Khan were still busy with the previous episode, so they didn’t contribute this time.
Storyboard breakdown for this episode
Start to 3:08 / My boards, cleanup by Gerald Kaye, revisions by Supervising Director Dan Duncan
3:08 to 07:02 / Jarelle Dampier, revisions by Supervising Director Dan Duncan
7:02 to 08:53 / Jess Cuffe
8:53 to 10:50 / My boards with Gerald’s cleanup (inserts by Jess)
12:00 to 12:47 / Jess Cuffe
12:47 to 15:37 / My boards with Gerald’s cleanup
15:37 to 19:30 / Jess Cuffe (with others on revision)
19:30 to end / My boards with Gerald’s cleanup
Spider-Man Unmasked
Broadcast on DisneyXD August 16, 2020
Storyboard production period: June/July 2019
Watch it on Amazon Prime, Disney+, Apple TV, Roku Channel, and Hulu. Or right here if you scroll down.
Part 1, directed by me
Finished Animatic
Synopsis:
After having to fight his way past Tinkerer, Spider-Man rushes to deliver a flash drive containing a post-mortem transmission from Octavius that could help to prove Max’s innocence to the board of education. Upon seeing the evidence, the head administrator states that they can get additional testimony from Aleksei Sytsevich. Spider-Man looks for Aleksei while the others stall, but finds that he has been transformed into Rhino by Swarm using Jackal’s old Rhino formula.
Finished Episode
Part 2, directed by Sol Choi
Finished Episode
Synopsis:
Curt Connors blackmails Spider-Man into unmasking himself before the board of education, resulting in Max’s firing and Connors becoming the interim headmaster until the end of the term. Knowing that Swarm is turning other people into human/animal hybrids for his gladiatorial-type contest called the “Underground Monster League,” the Spider Team must battle for their lives in front of the criminal underworld. Peter must also find a way to reconcile with Gwen and Anya for keeping his identity as Spider-Man a secret from them.
Next time: Generations
